So I've been writing some stuff and what not....
I wrote a song, and Im also writing a novel.
I've actually written several songs and poems.

One of my songs I kind've want some opinions on....
SO HELP ME OUT PEOPLEZ.


Hurr it is:

"This is to you."

These blank pages scattered across the floor are screaming for words to be written about us.
About me and you but I've got nothin' to say that is good nor that is true.
Now Its getting harder to breathe, and I can't imagine my life without you.
But I made a mistake, was told a lie and words of deception, straight to my eyes.
I feel so stupid thinking that there was a chance to be in his arms and watch time pass by.
But every time I look into his ugly but so beautiful eyes, Those beautiful blue eyes. All I see is lies.
Now Im lying here on the floor alone curled up from the lack of warmth from your heart.
These tears clinging to my face as they roll along the trail they've made before.
Here is a place that I have been all alone, and lost traces of my soul still remain untold.
That simple kiss goodbye was the hardest part in this world that I know.
This beautiful cold cruel world that we both now know.
All I want from you is to bring back home my heart to where it belongs,
Please bring back my heart and soul that you so selfishly hold and claim as your own.
I've never loved anybody like I've loved you before but you so easily push me away.
I'd give the world to you just so I could be yours to love and hold.
But now I've missed my chance and now I've lost you forever, from dawn till day I wait.
This wasn't the way I pictured you and me, and the future seems bleak.
And now Im dying for the oppurtunity just to have a chance with you.
I'd never shut you out and I'd never close the door in your face.
My arms are opened wide for your embrace.
Please tell me something unexpected, like the three little words I want to hear,
That would make everything so clear.
Even though I know the truth that its over I just want you to know,
I want you to know that This Is To You my dear.
Now I've wasted my time trying to tell you my only wish,
The one and only wish that belongs to my heart and keeps it alive and beating.
Before you run off without me like I know you will, time can only tell the future that it brings.
Oh, I just want to freeze time so we can grow closer together and fall in love,
Instead of falling farther apart from each other.
Its just one more chance before you forget about me forever.
But now Im waiting here so I can hear your voice over the telephone,
and I can spill my heart to you hoping for a yes but in the end tell you'll end up saying no.
Hurt and rejected, this is something I expected and I waste my time still.
But I will not give up until I have what I want, which is you and your love.
Even though this rain is pouring I'll still wait for you at your door.
The stars in the night sky fall while night turns to day and I forever wait for you.
I think this love is walking out the door because it doesn't belong.
Its not giving me another chance and now we are growing farther apart.
Baby its not to late, it'll never be to late in my world.
Its not another chance for you to push me away in this dreamscape,
Its an opportunity to embrace me in your arms as we lie awake in the cold night.
Even though I swore not to fall in love just to get hurt again
I trust you with my heart and not to break it once more.
Loving from a distance will never be enough for my torn and broken heart.


Im not done yet.
But hopefully I will be soon.
I need to edit it...
Cause...
It still sucks.

Tell me what you think!
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~Krys